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'monster if we cannot manage it well' - Movies or tv influence people's behavior



Eva Novita Sari 47 / 67  
Apr 29, 2014   #1
How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
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Television is a popular form of communication medium in any household. It has also becoming an important part in our daily life. It cannot be denied that television from which we get information and entertainments. It has contributed to the improvement of our society. But, on the country, I think television tends to have a tremendous influence on its viewers. In this essay I will give reasons about that.

Instead of advantages, the presence of television also affects negative on our society. Firstly, it is based on the recent research, all of people age are using this media to entertain themselves for an average of five hours a day. The content exposure of TV, of course, it will influence the viewers. It is not only their thinking but also attitude. Therefore, this can be seen from the fact that many criminalities are inspired from the scene of TV.

From other reasons, people can be adversely influenced by constant watching TV. They are less participate in physical and social activities, spend less time reading and working, and see a job of violence that can affect their feeling of security. For example, my friend is always watching television. Then, he becomes lazy for working because preoccupation.

In my opinion, television shows commercial advertisements on TV that can be a kind of advertising very bad for many children because they are not only sell product or advertise product, but they show their body too openly. This is not good for teenager, because it gives negative effect for them especially for their attitude. Therefore, television can be able to our on negative influence.

To sum up, it is clear that television will be a kind of monster if we cannot manage it well. It is very important for us to handle and manage the presence of television, especially for children and young generation.

fikri 5 / 310  
Apr 29, 2014   #2
It has also becoming an important part in our daily life

what does this sentence mean? please tell me.

you've written well, keep writing
niesaysi 16 / 281  
Apr 29, 2014   #3
Television is a popular formmeans of communication medium in any household.
It has also becomingbecome an important part in our daily life.
It cannot be denied that television is a medium from which we can get information and entertainments.

In this essay I will give reasons about that.

Better omit this.

Instead of advantages,T he presence of television has many negative impactsalso affects negative on our society.

Firstly, it isB ased on the recent research, all of people of all age are using this media to entertain themselves for an average of five hours a day.

TheDue to content exposure on TV, of course,itwill influence the viewers will be influenced , It is not only their thinking but also their attitude.

Good luck :)
eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1170  
Apr 29, 2014   #4
Although many sample writings for the five ones coming from some corners of the world are confidently shown, this seems more likely to make beginner students hard to polish their sentence structure. you'd better Focus on the time given, not the lengthy report.

Always watch this YouTube (the four-paragraph essay) :D

youtu.be/NiKOtoizjDY
upinipin 32 / 48  
Apr 29, 2014   #5
It has also becoming an important part in our daily life
BOMAT_IRA 29 / 39  
Apr 30, 2014   #6
It has also becoming an important part in our daily life.
Pahan 1 / 1824  
Apr 30, 2014   #7
Television is a popular form of communication medium in any household.

Television is one of the most popular media used by any household.
It has also becomingbecome an important part in our daily life. But, on the country, I think television tends to have a tremendous influence on its viewers and it can also be negative too.

In this essay I will give reasons about that.

I like if you take this sentence off from your intro.


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