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Multicultural society is much more beneficial?



megiacodon 5 / 15  
Jul 14, 2011   #1
A society with various types of culture is much more beneficial. I totally agree with that point.

To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when it comes to a society, it's also true. In case of Vietnam, our homeland has 54 ethnic groups and we all live together like a whole family. Differences in life style, culture, clothes, language, custom,...and many more bring us multifarious culture with many featured festival, food, songs,...that we are so proud of.

Secondly, as a multicultural society, it contains many features to be a tourists' destination. Foreigners, even people in the nation are interested in exploring and experiencing new land, new culture and such a colorful land is certainly their perfect choice! For that reason, diversity in culture society is a big advantage of the tourism industry and this can contribute much to the development of the whole society in general.

Adversely, it is said that a society with many religion, life style to be hard to control. Conflict and contradiction are inevitable. Especially, contradiction on religion and nationality are really serious and tough someway. I admit that to bring people from various culture together and to harmonize different culture is very tough, but it is worth the effort.

In conclusion, pros of a multicultural society far exceed the cons. As the world comes close together, and the whole world is becoming a big multicultural society.

EF_Susan - / 2310  
Jul 14, 2011   #2
To begin with, like the magnificent rainbow with seven colors, the variety itself is a priceless gift, and when it comes to a society, it's also true.

In the case of Vietnam, our homeland has 54 ethnic groups, and we all live together like one big family.

...and many more, bring us multifarious culture with many featured festivas , food, songs,...that we are so proud of.

Secondly, as a multicultural society, it contains many interesting features that attract tourists.

Adversely, it is said that a society with many religions , has a life style which is hard to control.---I don't understand this sentence.

As the world comes closer together, and the whole world is becoming a big multicultural society.

Have fun in school!

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