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Museum; see things in reality and feel their texture - it's unforgettable moment



gag379 4 / 4  
Sep 4, 2012   #1
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"Museums for many years have been place of knowledge and cultural exchange. Nowadays, there are more and more resources available on internet so museums will not be needed in the future."

To what extent do you agree or disagree??

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Undoubtedly, internet hqs emerged and is still emerging as an invincible,affordable and easily accessible source of knowledge, however, the value of the museums is still at large and their fate can not be decided right now.

Although internet can provide a vast medium of knowledge at just a click away, but the scenario that one watches and observes with one's eyes is irreplacable. In addition the internet can only provide the pictures, videos and statistics about various sculptures or orher historical prservings, but in a museum we can see them in reality and feel their texture wich is unforgettable moment for the whole life. Moreover , museums are run by various organisations whixh employ and pay their workers. Therefore, some people also visit there to save their employment and to help them financially to preserve the history for next generation.

On the other hand, internet is also advantageous in some aspects. For instance, it supplies information to one who can not reach the museum located in different province or nation, or he can not afford or has shortage of time due to busy schedule.

In conclusion, both of these sources of knowledge play their own roles, and no one can conquer on other altogether.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Sep 4, 2012   #2
Undoubtedly, internet hqs emerged and is still emerging as an invincible,affordable and easily accessible source of knowledge, however, the value of the museums is still at large and their fate can not be decided right now.

very impressively presented :)

Although internet can provide a vast medium of knowledge at just a click away, but the scenario of someone's tangible experiencewatches and observes with one'shis own eyes is irreplacable in value .
OP gag379 4 / 4  
Sep 4, 2012   #3
thanx for your valuable support
thaonguyen1901 10 / 25  
Sep 5, 2012   #4
An interesting Topic. I think your writing is rather short and need some ideas. I suggest you some more reasons why internet can not replace museums :

- Visiting museum is an effective way to educate small kids. Though internet has more information, but kids seldom sit in front of the screen to read a long article of history or culture significance. In contrast, they find it very interesting to visit a museum to see the bones of dinosaurs, to listen to stories of thousands-age.

- History museums are very important for archaeology. Experts can use the antiques for their important investigations.
- Museums also beneficial for tourism. They are the soul of a city/ country. The first place many tourists want to visit is the museum.


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