Canada has the plan to reduce the old coal-fired power in 2030 with accelerating from existing timetable that the defeating of trump's ideas to reborn the coal industry. They are two option which will give to the four provinces, Alberta, Saskatchewan, Nova Scotia, and New Brunswick, where still burn coal for power that it produces power using lower-emitting resources or using carbon capture and storage technology. Nowadays, the non-carbon emitting resource produces 80 percent of Canada's electricity and will increase by 10 percent in 2030. the use of the Canada Infrastructure Bank's public-private funding mechanism will help the Canadian government to the realization the transition out of coal-powered electricity.
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... by 10 percent in 2030.
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They are two options which will give ...
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thea (article ) plan to reduce ...
TheyThere are two optionoptions (singular/plural) which will give to the four provinces such as Alberta, Saskatchewan, ...
3. You should explain what is the two options , to make reader understand about your summary.
the use of theFurthermore , Canada Infrastructure (...) to the realization of the transition out of ...
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(1) Canada has
the plan to (...) power in 2030 withby accelerating from (...) defeating of t rump's (please using capital for mentioning a name ideas to reborn ... --> I did not get your point
... usage of coal-fired power by accelerating the existing fuel to defeat Trump's idea which want to reborn the coal industry
TheyThere are two options which will be given to the four provinces, (...), where stillthe burn coal for power (...) lower-emitting resources or using carbon capture and storage technology.
...where the burn coal is still used for powering the country that produces lower-emitting resources
(3) ... of Canada's electricity and it will increase by ...
(4) the use of the Canada Infrastructure Bank's public-private funding ...
They will use a fund from Canada Infrastructure's Bank to help the goverment starting the plan
thea plan to reduce (...) with acceleratingACCELERATION from existing timetable that theis defeating of trump's ...
1. In the beginning of your paragraph don't use "the" as your first article. Because "the" is used if you already mentioned before, and it refer to something.
2. that + is + defeating ---> present continous
3. ACCELERATION ---> NOUN
They are two
optionOPTIONS which will give ...
3. PLURAL NOT SINGULAR