The most noticeable change is the replacement of houses beside the West Park Secondary School

Writing Task 1
The diagrams show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its contraction in 1950.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map illustrates the changes that have occurred at the West Park Secondary School alongside the main road, over six decades period. The most noticeable change is the replacement of houses beside the school to be an expanded area of the car park and science block.

To begin, in 1950, the area of school was consisting of four parts such as for schooling, housing, farming and playing. Moreover, the next 30-years period, it changed by replace the farmland to be a sports field. In the north of it, there were car park and the science area which is built by destroying the housing. Going to the east, the main building of school existed while the playground was behind it.

Turning to 2010, while there has been an expansion of parking area which is surrounded the science block, the sports place has been constrained and it is placed next to the playground area. Finally, the car place is the largest area in 2010.

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Hi Anaguna, I hope to provide additional insights to your essay.

- havehas occurred at
- over a six decades period.
- of the houses
- besides the school
- and the science block.

- To begin with , in 1950,
- the area of the school
- was consistingconsisted of four parts
- it changed byand was replaced by the farmland
- InTowards the north of it ,
- there were car parks and the science
- area which is built by destroying the housinghouses .
- of the school existed

- of the parking area
- Finally, the car placepark is the largest area in 2010.

There you have it Anaguna, I hope the corrections provided above are useful in your revision.