Hi,
You write well, but I feel you better improve on structure. Iwish you followed this structure for this task;
Introduction -
The given table show charges in weekly rental cost and annual needed salaries in three different suburbs of London
Overview -
In general, of the three locations, Notting Hill shows the highest and Fulham is the least in both rental cost and salaries.
Details-
It is apparently seen that the rental cost in Notting Hill is the most expensive requiring $375 to $738 weekly for one and three bedrooms and with needed salaries $98,500 to $194000 respectively. Fulham area is the cheapest cost of renting a property just cost $600 weekly and 157500 annually needed salaries for three bedrooms. In contrast, Regent's park just remains in the middle of two areas. Although renting a property in this area is quite higher starting $325 for one bedroom to $650 for three bedrooms and therefore you need $85,500 and 170,500 salaries depending on the number of bedrooms required.
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