IELTS writing Task I about the number of fish caught and the number of fishing boats.

(NB: i am sorry i cannot insert the graph pictures because the image in my book)

A breakdown of the number of fish caught and the number of fishing crafts in Westhaven since 2008 until 2011 is shown by the bar charts. Taking everything into consideration, 2011 is the year with the greatest number of fish caught in both types of fish and fish crafts.

There was a gradual rise of the number of tuna that was caught since 2009 by 10. In 2008, swordfish caught stood at 75 while tuna caught was higher than tuna catching. Although the swordfish caught had an alternate trend between increase and decrease in each year, we can say that the swordfish caught had an increase trend. In the other hand, the swordfish caught stood at 75 and was reached 100 at 2011. The number of tuna catching in 2010 as equal as the sum of swordfish caught in 2011.

Furthermore, the total number of fish crafts stood at 50 in 2008. After a year, it was increased slightly in 2009 by 5 and continued reached a peak in 2011 by 15. In addition, there was a linier relation between the number of swordfish caught and the sum of fish crafts.

Hi Dioba

Here are my thoughts :)

You can search the diagram in google actually, just type the question as a keyword because we cannot check your task achievement if you do not put the chart

There was a gradual rise ofin the number of tuna

the swordfish caught had an increaseincreasing trend.
you should change the form of 'increase' as an adjective in noun phrase of 'an increasing trend'

InOn the other hand, ...
'In the other hand; is not an idiom in the English language. the meaning can be that you are holding something in the "other" hand

'On the other hand' means from an opposing point of view.

it was increased slightly ...

In addition, there was a linierlinear relation between ...

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