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The line graph compares the number of population in the U.S. state of Oregon during 1940 to 2000. Oregon had three counties and population was measured in thousands in each counties. Overall, it can be seen that there were a gradual rise of the population in three different counties of Oregon.
Columbia and Yamhill had a similar pattern. In 1940, the population of both stood at about 30 thousand. Then, they rose gradually in 1970 and again it grew rapidly in the following thirty years. 2000 saw the differences number of population between Columbia and Yamhill and it was different about 15 thousand population.
Washington had more significant increase than other two counties. Population stood at 75 thousand in 1940, which was higher than Columbia and Yamhill. Next, the population grew dramatically to between 120 and 135 thousand. This population continued to rise rapidly in 2000 to above 240 thousand. With this rate, Washington was a leading counties which had the most population in Oregon.
The line graph compares the number of population in the U.S. state of Oregon during 1940 to 2000. Oregon had three counties and population was measured in thousands in each counties. Overall, it can be seen that there were a gradual rise of the population in three different counties of Oregon.
Columbia and Yamhill had a similar pattern. In 1940, the population of both stood at about 30 thousand. Then, they rose gradually in 1970 and again it grew rapidly in the following thirty years. 2000 saw the differences number of population between Columbia and Yamhill and it was different about 15 thousand population.
Washington had more significant increase than other two counties. Population stood at 75 thousand in 1940, which was higher than Columbia and Yamhill. Next, the population grew dramatically to between 120 and 135 thousand. This population continued to rise rapidly in 2000 to above 240 thousand. With this rate, Washington was a leading counties which had the most population in Oregon.