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TASK 1: the number of students gaining English language teacher training qualification



INA 6 / 12  
Nov 23, 2015   #1
The table reveals that the total number of students who gained the teacher of language English qualification in the United Kingdom in two academic years between 2007-2008 and 2008-2009 with two different qualifications. Overall it can be seen that, in both years, there remained stable in 2007-2008 and 2008-2009 roughly 32,937 students. In any case, there was a slight decrease in the proportion of male gaining English language training qualifications in the final period.

Between 2007 and 2008, the number of female who qualified student almost 3 times as much as male students which is 23,842 student. In this period, most of the students qualified with TEFL than Cambridge UCLES CELTA or other degrees which was accounted 24,446 students.

In the next period, from 2008 to 2009, the total of students who qualified for English language teacher was slow increased by 32,945 students and it was followed by increasing of the female by 24,324 students. By contrast, the male student decreased of 0,7% and this period TEFL remained popular qualification which was taken by the students and only 26,2% of them were male


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vangiespen - / 4077  
Nov 24, 2015   #2
Ina, here is my take on the necessary corrections to your essay:

The table reveals that the total number of students who gained the teacher of language English EARNED THEIR ENGLISH TEACHING qualification CERTIFICATE in the United Kingdom in COVERING two academic years between 2007-2008 and 2008-2009 with two different qualifications. Overall it can be seen that, in DURING both years, there remained THERE WAS A stable NUMBER OF STUDENTS in 2007-2008 and 2008-2009 REPRESENTED BY roughly 32,937 students. In any case, t There was a slight decrease in the proportion of male STUDENTS gaining English language training qualifications in the final period.

Between 2007 and 2008, the number of femaleS who qualified AS studentS WERE almost 3 times as much as THE male students which is AT 23,842 student. In DURING this period, most of the students qualified with UNDER TEFL than Cambridge , UCLES , CELTA , or other degrees which was accounted FOR 24,446 students.

In the next period, f From 2008 to 2009, the total of students who qualified for English language teacher was SHOWED A slow increasedby AS INDICATED BY 32,945 students and it WHICH was followed by increasing AN INCREASE of the female STUDENTS by 24,324 students. By IN contrast, the male studentS decreased of BY 0,7% and DURING this period, TEFL remained A popular qualification, which was taken by the students and only 26,2% of them were male.


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