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Numerous positive effects of the new technology on our daily life.


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May 7, 2011   #1
Thanks in advance for reading and correcting.
Bad aspects of modernity.

Every body can see clearly numerous positive effects of the new technology on our dailly life. however, few people are worried about its drawbacks. Indeed, the new technology complicates our life more than it facilitates it by damaging our nature, weakening our bodies and destroying culture and good values.

No one can deny the those perfect advantages of technology on all the domains in the modern life. It facilitates communication, enabling people to move from place to place easily and in short time. It helps lot in education that students nowadays can have access to foreign universitites and contacting teachers all over the world while he's sitting in his bedroom infront the screen of his computer. In every one's house there are lot of luxurious technology devices that make the house more comfortable and give a world of entertainment and happiness for both children and adults.

This happiness, others say, is not really what it seems to be. people in modern societies live in crisis and psychological disasters due to technology. People have to have more than one job to satisfy their needs. Many luxuries become obligations in nowadays. At house there should be electric devices like the oven, a big fridge washing mashine, a plat form TV and to less degree dishwasher. Children need more expenses for schooling, clothing, entertainment and the like. Adding that the family has to have a mean of transport. These expenses push the family to get big loans from banks and then financial crisis starts.

Far from economical problems, new technology damages nature and contributes in natural disasters such as terrible floods, tsounamis and earthquakes and the like. Geant enterprises, interested merly in making profects, polluts oceans and destroy forests that give life to other living creatures. This has been leading to the disappear of many spicious and the appearance of mortal diseases. Many mortal diseases are found lately to be consequences of the use of new technologies. For example the daily use of some electric machines facilitate work but causes cancer.

By and large, New technology has both positive aspects and negative effects that necessitates a serious debat on how to minimise maximum draw backs and benefit as much as possible.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 7, 2011   #2
Capitalize the first word of every sentence:
However, a few people are...

It helps a lot in education, because students nowadays can have access to foreign universities and contacting contact teachers all over the world while sitting in their bedrooms in front the screen of their computers. Keep it plural, because you wrote "students."

Children accrue more expenses for...

For example the daily use of some electric machines facilitate work but causes cancer.---Good point!

Do not capitalize New:
By and large, New technology has...

:-)
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 8, 2011   #3
Hello every one.
I have got my BA in English studies (2010) with 12.79/ 20, university Ibn Zohr in Agadir in Morocco. I'm looking for a university to continue my study. Please help me whith any info you have.

Thanks
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 9, 2011   #4
Please help me whith any info you have.

Sometimes you need to go with your intuition. Do you have any schools in mind?

It all depends on your circumstances, too. In what country will you study?

I think you should choose a program the way people might choose a school for their child: Read many reviews online, and read some articles written by various professors for professional journals. Do you read professional journals about language studies? Do you have a favorite author? Maybe your favorite scholar has a program she recommends. You should DIVE INTO YOUR READING and really enjoy it. Find the right school for yourself by reading about what fascinates you.

Who is your favorite expert in the field you are entering?
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 10, 2011   #5
Thanks lot, you are always there for help. many thanks K

Can u read this and feed me back.
About journals and articals. Can you please send me some useful sites.
I 'm from Morocco and I d like to countinue my studdies here or else where. I prefer another country like France or USA but if not I can do it here. I just don't want to waste my time doing no thing. I have a brother in USA and another in France but i don't know how to get there

I am interested in Literature but I don't have a special topic except the two researches i did one about Thomas Hardies Jude the Obscure n another about Samuel B WAITING FOR GODOT.

If there is any possibilities to get to a university somewhere tell me. i don't care where to continue my studies here or else where.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 12, 2011   #6
These are great aspirations, Ismael... but I still don't understand the problem. Why not just search google for schools near where your brother lives?

For example, if he lives in Detroit, search for colleges near Detroit and look at their websites.
Maybe your brother can even recommend a school near where he lives. Can you stay with him while you go to school?

:-)
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 13, 2011   #7
Thanks again EF-k.

My brother sent me some adresses before. I tried them but, unfortunately, I didn't have a good mark in a test (french test) to get a visa. I am not very goot at french.

I may stay with my brother, he lives in Paris. I just look for a way to get rid of french test and to get the visa easily. Is there any possible way?
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 15, 2011   #8
I just look for a way to get rid of french test and to get the visa easily. Is there any possible way?

I don't know... this is something I am not very knowledgeable about. I think the best strategy might be like this: try to get into the school that you can attend most easily while living in a place where you have family to help you. Do a few semesters in the place where you will be able to concentrate the best. Then, you can earn high grades and transfer to the school of your choice.

So, rather than trying to get rid of that poor test score, try to find opportunities to accomplish high scores. Is there a school you could attend in the place where you live right now?
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 16, 2011   #9
I can live Agadir, south of Morocco, but I 'd like to finish studies elsewhere in Morocco or abroad. I prefer Kenitra or Rabat.
I just can't find enough infos about the third cycle in these cities.
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 17, 2011   #10
Hello everyone.
I am preparing an analitical study to Waiting for Godot by S. Beckett and I need your help; So, please if there's some one to help me, saying his/her proposed PLAN to work on. Many thinks.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 18, 2011   #11
third cycle in these cities.

I don't know what you mean by third cycle.

Well... what if you ask some people who live there? I wonder if you can find an online forum for people in those cities. Does craigslist cover those areas?? I wonder...

Craigslist has discussion forums for local people.
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 18, 2011   #12
Third cycle is the MASTER.
Craigslist ! I'm a bit silly coz I ve never heard abt this word!
Anyway thanks lot. I ll manage the matter.
thanks lot
Rajiv 55 / 400  
May 20, 2011   #13
Craigslist ! I'm a bit silly coz I ve never heard abt this word!

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Craigslist
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 21, 2011   #15
Yeah... I looked on the Morocco Craigslist, though, and there is not a lot of activity. You might have to go visit the school you like and talk to people in person!

:-)
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 22, 2011   #16
Thanks lot Kevin.
I am checking some universities site. I gather some info that says there will be the Master in Casa about Moroccan American cultural studies next year. I wish I can be accepted.

May u plz send me some info abt "Moroccan American cultural studie" or some useful sites.
thanks
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
May 23, 2011   #17
moroccanamericanculture.org/grants.html
friendsofmorocco.org/yellow.html

Maybe these will be useful. :-)
OP start208 14 / 68  
May 24, 2011   #18
Thanks lot friend. you are really helpfull and friendly.


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