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Writing is one of the things I used to hate the most - My first Reflective essay



aizuddin 2 / -  
Aug 24, 2014   #1
This my first time writting reflective essay. i also make lot of grammer n spelling error. please help me.i no that i was no good in writing

Reflective essay

Writing is one of the things I used to hate the most because I usually made a lot of spelling error. I hate it when teachers would ask me to write one. I know that I was not good in writing but still I have to complete the task. I remember Mr Subra my english lecturer would say like this ' who am i to say no '. But now thing started to changed as I entered IPG Kampus Ipoh.

Regarding my coursework I enjoyed myself when performing this task eventhough there are some obstacles that I had to face .First problem I faced was lack of team work,I know we majored in Remedial and and some of us were really bad in english. But we tried to help each other as team that what team for and as the saying two head is better than one. We ought to find a suitable time for us to discuss about the topic and it really hard with our tight schedule.But we manage to sit together and discussing about it. We came out with a few idea but still it was not good enough for A result. So we seeked help from other 's class who major in english and It was paid off to ask them. They were really helpfuland kind to us

Besides, the time given was barely enough for me to do some reading and researches about the topic . To say it frankly i was really exhausted to some reasearch in library which is take me 12 minutes walking to get there.I think more time should be given as we are new in this field and this will not be a problem when I am used to this kind of task in the future.So time is do matter to me.

Apart from that, from this task i learned that children should be given freedom to make their own decisions for their future.I personnaly think that parents rightly need to give more supports to their children 's interest instead to force doing what we like.It does not matter how good our choice is ,if the children is not interested they not give put their effort into it. I also learned that children also have rights and liberties like adults.

On top of that, by giving childen chance to determine their future it helps them matured. In this era which the world has become more challenging, it help children gained valuable experience. In this way,children will know how to manage their own life and they will learns how to solve any problems witout relay on others.That the thing I learned ,giving children chance to decide their future help them matured .

In a nut shell,parent should let their children deteremined their on future because they have right to choose for their future .Parents should to support their children interest not force them doing what we like because it always end bad for two sides.It all depend on us,as parents to handle such situation.

vangiespen - / 4077  
Aug 24, 2014   #2
You were really able to express yourself well in this essay even though you are not a native English speaker. For the spelling errors, I suggest that you learn to use the spell check programs that come with all document writing software such as Word and Open Office. Normally those programs will not only help you fix the spelling errors but also guide you in simple sentence structure as it makes suggestions for certain sentence or paragraph structures that it deems to be wrong or confusing. Over all, you did a very good job on this paper. I know you can improve your writing even more over time. All the best writers get to that status through years of practicing their craft and you are well on your way to that. Good luck!


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