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Overall, there are three stages generally to reuse the rainwater - IELTS TASK 1 diagram



ainirere /  
Mar 26, 2016   #1
The diagram below shows how rainwater is reused.

The diagram depicts the work of reused of rainwater. Overall, three ways of reissued water process are presented in this diagram.

The first way is by saving the rainwater in the dam. This stored water then passes treatment plant process for purity so that it can be used, such as for drinking and another home necessity. The second way is by saving the rainwater in the tank, however this process does not have any treatment plant, thereby the water is used through for the garden in which will be absorbed into the ground and flow to the river by drain.

The last way is by recycling household waste water. Before water reused for the necessity, the water must be cleaned first by treatment plant likewise the first way. If the treated water is excess, then it will flow through the river. All of the water flowing to the river will be absorbed by the sun and downgraded over by the rain. These are how the rainwater reused.


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Yusri31 28 / 29  
Mar 26, 2016   #2
The diagram depicts the work of reused of rainwater
(The process regarding how rainwater is reused can be seen in the diagram).Overall, three ways of reissued water ...(Overall, there are three stages generally to reuse the rainwater)

This stored water then passes treatment plant process for purity so that it can be usedBY HUMAN , such as for drinking and ...
... thereby the water is used through for the gardenin which (WHICH) will be absorbed into the ground and flow to (FLOW INTO ) the river by drain.

Before water IS reused for the necessity, the water ...
All of the water flowing to (FLOWING ON) the river will be absorbed by ...
OP ainirere /  
Mar 29, 2016   #3
Thank you Yusri for your correction :)


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