Palmela Wilson is a freshman majoring in English. She wants to look for a part-time job to get work

which part-time job is appropriate for a first-year student?

Dear Wilson,
It is my great honor that you asked for my advice regarding which part-time job is appropriate for you - a first-year student. I genuinely hope my suggestion is constructive enough to help you have the best selection.

First of all, I am convinced that it is a bright idea to work in the second semester as you have been acquainted with university life, thus being able to manage your time. On that note, spending some hours working is no longer a complicated task. Additionally, as one majoring in English, I strongly recommend that you should make the most out of what you have learned. Working as either a translator or an English tutor, or an English teaching assistant is not a bad plan. It will not only fortify your English foundation but also enrich your working experience. Last but not least, since a university student is occupied with studying, I firmly believe that you should work 10 hours per week as a maximum . Most of your time should be spent on studying - the most significant mission.

It will take you a little time to read, but in view of a favorable outcome, it is definitely worthwhile. Please count on me whenever you encounter any difficulties in the future.

Yours sincerely,

If this letter was written for a task 1 essay, then it should not be more than 200 words. This may be considered overwritten for a 20 minute task.

There is a lack of clarity as to why Wilson would ask this person for advice. Why is it an honor for this person? What capacity does the writer have to give beneficial thoughs on the question? The second paragraph offers sound advice. It meets the information requirements of Wilson.

The last paragraph is confusing. The first sentence , in particular, fails to properly inform the reader. What is that sentence about? What does it refer to? What does he have to read and why?