Living life at its peak it feels like you are on top of the world, with your lovely boy or your lovely girl.
Very intriguing... This line and many lines are really enjoyable to read.
I want to move the comma, though:
Living life at its peak, it feels like you are on top of the world with your lovely boy or your lovely girl.
Oh, no, that is not what to do. This is better:
Living life at its peak
it feels like you are on top of the world, with your lovely boy or your lovely girl.
the time you have remaining--- would this be better than remains?
What is the inauguration you mention?
This is good stuff... thanks for sharing it with us!