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IELTS task 1- People who get arrested in during five years



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Nov 9, 2015   #1
The two diagrams display the percentages of males and females that put in jail during five years due violations in society that end in 1994. There can be seen that in bar chart, females has almost equal percentages to performed violations compare to males, but the pie chart showed that males were detained more than females.

There are five main reasons for people to execute abominable actions. The first and the highest percentages is the public drinking, dominated by women in 38%. The second highest infringement that women's has done is assaulting, the number is nearly 20%. However, in the drive drinking violating, men took the most contributor to this deed in 27%.

At last, breach of order and theft violations are more accomplished by men. Taking rate of 18% in breach of order and 16% in the theft cases. Females has less average rate than males in these two reasons. Overall, it can be seen that all of the reasons can caused people to jail, but based on these calculation men got arrest more than women.


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