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Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.Do you agree or disagree?
Cinema has been considered as an extremely powerful source of entertainment from many years.However some people feel that it's trend has decreased owing to certain reasons,but still I believe that inspite of major evolution in the field of entertainment ,the Cinema would not lost it's existance.
To begin with the critics of Cinema,they may question it's value as they might think that large screen LCD's with better video and sound quality may replace cinema.
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Hi, Raj44. I'm going to assume that "LCD" refers to LCD television. Here are my grammar/word choice corrections:
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Moreover, most of the people in the developing world are from lower middle class families and cannot afford an expensive LCD television for something as trivial as entertainment . Just for the sake of reducing monotony in life ,they cannot afford an LCD worth thousands of rupees.So , Cinema is the only choice left for them.
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I hope that has helped you!
