Toefl Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully

Toefl Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make plans at all for free time. What do you prefer planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reason to support your answer.

Most people think that weekend or free time is a time of leisure after doing planned work and following a schedule whole week, so the purpose is to take rest without bothering about any planning. Owing to take the full advantage of my free time I, however, prefer to plan my weekend. By scheduling my free time, I avoid wasting my time and take care of my family, friends and sleep.

Acknowledging the need of having some free time, for a fresh start, I always make plans for it. If I want to play golf and meet a friend, but I don't schedule my time for awake up, and taking breakfast then I might miss an important meeting with some friend or community golf game on weekend. Being a family man, I am accustomed of spending some time with my family that can only be possible if I schedule my time in such a way that I can meet my friends, as well as have a dinner with my family.

People mostly spend the whole week or do their job according to a schedule. People, who do not have a plan for their leisure work, are usually late for their work or unable to accomplish the assigned task. Students can miss preparation for the test or quiz since they play without planning.

My body rhythm doesn't allow me to work without plan. I sleep at time, but if I stayed awake and watch movies, without planning, late at night on weekend, I wouldn't be able to get up on time the next morning. I can ruin my Monday, the first day of a week, after getting to the work late and by feeling drowsiness the rest of the day.

World is moving in a fast pace and getting some free time in such a mechanized life is blissful. I always prefer to plan my free time in such a way that I can be able to have some rest, as well as enjoy with my friends and relatives.

Most people think that weekend or free time is a time of leisure after doing planned work and following a schedule whole week, so the purpose is to take rest without bothering about any planning. Owing to take the full advantage of my free time I, however, prefer to plan my weekend. By scheduling my free time, I avoid wasting my time and take care of my family, friends and sleep. (Perhaps you could reword this like "Scheduling free time allows me to avoid wasting time while making time to do things I want to do, such as spending time with my family and friends or catching up on some well-deserved sleep.")

Acknowledging the need of having some free time, for a fresh start,(this does not really seem to fit) I always make plans for it(what does "it" refer to?) . If I want to play golf and meet a friend, but I don't schedule my time for awake up, and taking breakfast then I might miss an important meeting with some friend or community golf game on weekend. (This sentence is not completely coherent. What you are trying to say is lost. Are you saying that if you have made plans to play golf and you have also made plans to meet a friend, but you have a meeting as wel, you have to plan your time carefully to make sure that you can meet all your commitments and still have time for fun?) Being a family man, I am accustomed of(should be "to" not "of") spending some time with my family that can only be possible if I schedule my time in such a way that I can meet my friends, as well as have a dinner with my family.

People mostly spend the whole week or do their job according to a schedule. People who do not have a plan for their leisure work, are usually late for their work or unable to accomplish the assigned task. Students can miss preparation for the test or quiz since they play without planning.

My body rhythm doesn't allow me to work without plan. I sleep at time, but if I stayed awake and watch movies, without planning, late at night on weekend, I wouldn't be able to get up on time the next morning. I can ruin my Monday, the first day of a week, after getting to the work late and by feeling drowsiness the rest of the day. (Restate it in a more clear way. ex: My body runs on set schedule, so planning to get things done at the right times is essential. For example, if I stay up later than I usually would to watch a movie on a weekend, the entire next day is ruined. I end up being late for work, or feel drowsy the entire day.)

World is moving in (should be "at") a fast pace and getting some free time in such a mechanized (I think you're looking for a different word here...) life is blissful. I always prefer to plan my free time in such a way that I can be able to have some rest, as well as enjoy with my friends and relatives.

Overall, your ideas are good. Your writing just needs to be cleaned up a bit to reflect better grammar. Good job!

Hi Sami- thanks sami for your feed back.
1- I plan my free time to do some activities.
2- use some example.
3- you find relaxation in your free time.
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