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People Who Refuse to Pay Tax to The State



Trias 23 / 27  
May 24, 2015   #1
People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In general, people tend to be extremely critical when it comes to their financial. Some of them come up with the idea of not paying tax to the government so they can keep all their income. I narrow bunch of reasons to down two to explain why I come to disagree with this opinion.

My first reason is development of facility and infrastructure in the country. Bear in mind how government carries out highways, bicycle tracks, city parks or streets that we use every day. The fund which used to build them came from the tax paid by people from their income. In fact, the government in Indonesia gives opportunity of its people to come up with any idea of what facility they need and will eventually take it into account in the next development plan. By using this method, government can aim for a more efficiency and enhance its credibility to people.

The following reason to support in paying tax to the country is public service sector, especially health. It turns out that the tax also pays for under prosperity citizens' medication. For example, poor people in Indonesia are registered in a health program in which they can go to a hospital or other public health facilities for free whenever they get sick. It will be horrifying if the government does not make the most of the tax paid by people, or worse, if people do not pay it anymore. Health rate in Indonesia could fall dramatically in the long run.

As mentioned above, I strongly disagree if people refuse to pay tax to the country only for their greedy reasons. They should take their time and bear in mind that the particular portion of their earnings will benefit others in the long run. People can brag about loving to the country, but action speaks louder than words. They should not let their greediness take its toll on the country's development or the poor's need for medication.

justivy03 - / 2265  
May 24, 2015   #2
- In general, people tend to be extremely critical when it comes to their financialfinances .

- I narrow bunch of reasons to down to two to explain why I come to disagree with this opinion.

- My first reason is the development of facility and infrastructure in the country.

- Rephrasing;
The following reason to support in paying tax to the country is public service sector, especially health. It turns out that the tax also pays for under prosperity citizens' medication.

The public service sector especially the health department should be taken huge amount of tax as they will end up taking it out from the citizens who seek their services.

- People can brag about loving to thetheir country, but action speaks louder than words.

Trias, this essay is more of a reminder that we still need to work on linking the ideas and thoughts and turn them into a very good read for the readers.

Make sure that you proof read and mind the flow of your ideas, this will keep your readers to read through and will get your message across.

Keep writing

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