Some people say that teachers have the biggest influence on child's development once he/she starts.

impact on child's growth

I agree with this viewpoint for two reasons. Firstly, teachers play a fundamental role in providing knowledge for the development of young people. Not only do the teachers arm students with the knowledge they are also of great help to students by giving proper explanations and feedback at the time of need. Besides, teachers are always the ones who encourage their students to study better. For example, teachers' suggestions will be the driving force to promote the activeness and curiosity of students, ending the stagnation of students before new lessons. Secondly, teachers are likely to have a huge impact on a student's personality, since children tend to learn things through observation and imitation. For instance, children who are quiet and live in the shell of their parents when studying in a friendly environment with many interesting things will change their personality. As a result, teachers are an important factor in the assessment of students' performance that their parents may not be able to do.

The writer is responding to a Task 2 IELTS essay as if she were answering a class recitation. This is an unacceptable format that will result in the student garnering a failing score should this have been an actual test. There is no proper formatting within the 4 paragraph requirement, the first problem in this essay. The 4 paragraphs are composed of:

- Prompt restatement + personal opinion
- 2 reasoning paragraphs
- Summary conclusion

Seeing as the discussion does not adhere to the scoring requirements, the exam taker will not be able to get maximum scoring points for the individual scoring considerations. All of the reasons presented are rushed and lacking in full discussion developement. This is a non-passing presentation. The student should try again, this time, follow the required formatting for all sections and make sure to properly develop the reasoning paragraphs in a manner that can actually receive scoring credits.

If the IELTS requirements are not considered though, the writer shows an understanding of the prompt. There is a simple and acceptable discussion presented in a short manner as well. The student at least shows that the opinion created is related to the discussion.

This essay is not appropriate to the format of the standard essay like IELTS, TOEIC,... There is no an introduction and conclusion which allow the essay more fluent and clear. Moreover, the number of word do not fulfill the requirements (at least 250 words from IELTS).