while others like to move another place and searching new area
I think this is superfluous, maybe change it into a purpose would be better.
I believe that moving to other places duringin my life provides many good opportunities for me in my job, relationships, and other parts of my life.
would you agree if I revise this sentence like this, it will be concise: I believe that moving to other places provides many good opportunities of job, relationship, and other potential benifits for me.
The following statements express my basic reasons for this opinion .
superfluous words
when I go to other places, I can be familiar with new people, new culture, and new belief