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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the big car-making company's sales in four regions: South America, North America, Asia, and Europe from 2006 to 2010.
Overall, the number of car consumption in Asia and Europe was higher than in other regions. Besides, North America and South America took a small percentage, even had a downtrend.
Firstly, in Europe, the total car sales doubled from a quarter in 2006 to a half in 2010. This made Europe become the biggest car-consuming region at the end of the period. In contrast, the sales in Asia had a slight decline while kept steady at 35 percent in 2006 and 2007 then increased to 38 percent the following year but finally went down significantly to 30 percent.
There was an obvious fluctuation in the proportion in South America at around 11 percent over the period. South America reached the lowest sale with only 5 percent in 2007. In North America, the proportion felt down gradually from less than a third to just 9 percent.
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Total car sales 2006-2010
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the big car-making company's sales in four regions: South America, North America, Asia, and Europe from 2006 to 2010.
Overall, the number of car consumption in Asia and Europe was higher than in other regions. Besides, North America and South America took a small percentage, even had a downtrend.
Firstly, in Europe, the total car sales doubled from a quarter in 2006 to a half in 2010. This made Europe become the biggest car-consuming region at the end of the period. In contrast, the sales in Asia had a slight decline while kept steady at 35 percent in 2006 and 2007 then increased to 38 percent the following year but finally went down significantly to 30 percent.
There was an obvious fluctuation in the proportion in South America at around 11 percent over the period. South America reached the lowest sale with only 5 percent in 2007. In North America, the proportion felt down gradually from less than a third to just 9 percent.
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