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The percentage of international and UK students gaining second class degrees or better



nguyenhung1711 1 / -  
Jul 17, 2022   #1

UK and international students of information technology and international law



The bar chart presents the comparison in proportion between international and British students achieving second class degrees or higher at a popular university of the UK in 2009.

Overall, there were huge differences between the number of UK and international students gaining second class degrees or HIGHER in information technology and international law. In six remaining subjects, the distinctions were inconsiderable.

Looking at the data, we can see that the percentages of students who had electrical engineering and information technology 's second class degrees from the UK was approximately 60%, less than all over the world (80-85%). The NEXT FOUR subjects WERE illustrated a contrasting trend. The number of UK 's students in Art history and Sociology took up the same proportion (80%), more than 5-10% compared to the others. While national students who got degrees in international law were 70%, the foreign students only accounted for 45%. We turn TURNING to the last field which had the number of British students dominated - English literature, with 75% MORE THAN 20 % COMPARED TO THE OTHERS .

Especially, about nursing and accountancy, the percentage of students achieving a second or higher degree with British citizenship was the same as total friends from many countries around the world for one field, there were 75% and 60% ,respectively.

To conclude, in 2009 among a famous UK university, major exchange students were keen on information technology, otherwise, British pupils prioritized art history and sociology.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Jul 18, 2022   #2
The writer has written a task 2 opinion essay instead of a task 1 reporting essay. A task 1 essay is first identified by the number of words, no more than 200, and second, by the analytical report presentation. These are different from the task 2 essay that has a minimum 250 word requirement and a thorough personal opinion discussion. The writer also shows a lack of understanding when it comes to creating the report because he uses all caps in certain instances of the presentation, which will result in a failing GRA score because that is a writing rule violation. All caps are used only in certain instances, but never in a report presentation for data. That is not how information is highlighted in a task 1 report. It is done through the use of proper professional and academic terminologies instead.


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