THE PERFORMANCE OF THE FOURTH INDUSTRIAL REVOLUTION IN KOREAN PUBLIC DIPLOMACY

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THE PERFORMANCE OF THE FOURTH INDUSTRIAL REVOLUTION IN KOREAN PUBLIC DIPLOMACY:

FOCUS ON KOREA-VIETNAM DIPLOMATIC RELATIONS

Diplomacy has an important role in each country. In particular, in the background of the globalization era, the role of diplomacy is more central and can be a crucial chain of national development. Until now, the process of diplomacy development has been long, and traditional diplomacy has maintained an important mission, and as the 21st century a new concept of public diplomacy emerges. This is a part of traditional diplomacy and has a variety of influences on the diplomatic process of each country. Also, the 21st century is referred to as the era of the scientific revolution and the era of the 4th industrial revolution. And the purpose of paper is to examine how these elements are applied in the field of public diplomacy in Korea and what effects can have. More over this paper conducted a survey on 315 Vietnamese who are living in Vietnam, entitled "Status of the use of the 4th industrial revolution achievements in the process of implementing Korean public diplomacy policies", and important conclusions were presented according to the survey results.

Keywords: Fourth Industrial Revolution, Korea-Vietnam public diplomacy, application of science and technology, social media, major activities in public diplomacy

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