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QUESTION; Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When I was hight school, there was some people said me that " we should make an important decision alone because no one know our desire as well as ourselves"
But, when I grew up I found It is not ture!! A person is not always necessery make an important decision alone, consulting others may be the best way of making decision. Because I think that everything can be looked in various aspects, and learn something new because it is possible to see the situation more clearly because of the objective opinions of others. So, I agree with this statement that a person should never make an important decision alone.Threre are at least three reason why I agree with this statement by following below:
To begin with, a person should consult other when making an important decision to avoid possibly mistakes. For example, last 2 years ago, I hesitated to choose my faculty that I should study. In my head wanted to study a doctor, but in my heart wanted to study a law. I was confused and realized that I could not made a wrong decision due to affect all of my future. So, I decided to ask the comment of my families, my teachers, and my sister's friends who experience likes me. They gave me a good advice which were very useful for me of making an important decision. I finally decided to study a law which is what I love, and right now I am sure that I had made a right decision that consulted others, because I am happy with it . If that time, I choosed it myself without consulting others, I might choose to study a doctor who was not happy, and repent later for making a wrong mistakes.
In addition, making an important decision is necessery for teenagers are too young. Because they don't experience a lot of their lives. So, it is very important not to make a significant judgment alone, but all teens should ask the older people for a good advice. For example, one of my brother's friends who teenager. He alone took a decison of going through his peers and perssure and ended up drinking and doing drug with his friends. This happens as result of feeling tension and anxiety his a wrong decision. Causing from he did not know how to deny his friends and what is the wrong and right. If he consults older people for advice. They may have got the good feedback for them. This will help to relieve pressure, tension and anxiety.
Moreover, I think that making an important decision alone is unacceptable for some job, especially for company or business. For example, in the business, if owner want to increase budget to develop a company, but he decides to do so by himself without consulting with accountances who are good at calculating budget, the business may be turn down. So, the owner has to waste a lot of money because he makes an importance decision alone.
In conclusion, I agree that a person should never make an important decision alone and the best way for making a decision is consulting with other person.
QUESTION; Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When I was hight school, there was some people said me that " we should make an important decision alone because no one know our desire as well as ourselves"
But, when I grew up I found It is not ture!! A person is not always necessery make an important decision alone, consulting others may be the best way of making decision. Because I think that everything can be looked in various aspects, and learn something new because it is possible to see the situation more clearly because of the objective opinions of others. So, I agree with this statement that a person should never make an important decision alone.Threre are at least three reason why I agree with this statement by following below:
To begin with, a person should consult other when making an important decision to avoid possibly mistakes. For example, last 2 years ago, I hesitated to choose my faculty that I should study. In my head wanted to study a doctor, but in my heart wanted to study a law. I was confused and realized that I could not made a wrong decision due to affect all of my future. So, I decided to ask the comment of my families, my teachers, and my sister's friends who experience likes me. They gave me a good advice which were very useful for me of making an important decision. I finally decided to study a law which is what I love, and right now I am sure that I had made a right decision that consulted others, because I am happy with it . If that time, I choosed it myself without consulting others, I might choose to study a doctor who was not happy, and repent later for making a wrong mistakes.
In addition, making an important decision is necessery for teenagers are too young. Because they don't experience a lot of their lives. So, it is very important not to make a significant judgment alone, but all teens should ask the older people for a good advice. For example, one of my brother's friends who teenager. He alone took a decison of going through his peers and perssure and ended up drinking and doing drug with his friends. This happens as result of feeling tension and anxiety his a wrong decision. Causing from he did not know how to deny his friends and what is the wrong and right. If he consults older people for advice. They may have got the good feedback for them. This will help to relieve pressure, tension and anxiety.
Moreover, I think that making an important decision alone is unacceptable for some job, especially for company or business. For example, in the business, if owner want to increase budget to develop a company, but he decides to do so by himself without consulting with accountances who are good at calculating budget, the business may be turn down. So, the owner has to waste a lot of money because he makes an importance decision alone.
In conclusion, I agree that a person should never make an important decision alone and the best way for making a decision is consulting with other person.
