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A phenomenon of social networking is rapidly increase in 21st century. SUMMARY TASK 7



rosadesiana 38 / 38  
Aug 30, 2016   #1
Hello, here is my latest summarizing task...
and i can't wait to see your very constructive feedbacks .. :)
thank you ..

SUMMARY TASK 7
SOCIAL NETWORKING


A phenomenon of social networking is rapidly increase in 21st century. Online social networking is a community which the unknown-people can be connected and share the personal information. A large number of social network sites which most widely used are Facebook, Instagram, Path, etc. A current statistic data shows that 75 percent of internet users visit the social networking sites, and Italians is the highest users all over the world, each person approximately spends 78 hours per year. Compare with Japan, they spend only 30 hours per year to visit the online social networking or to check what is the up-to-date issue in cyberspace. Basically, if you can take the upside of this phenomenon, it may give you many connections to share your interesting in professional world across the globe. On the other hand, if the users are unwary about the acquaintances, they will be affected by anyone who found on internet. The bad sides that directly impact the future adolescents such as, spending less time in face-to-face communications, separating from the friends and family or even giving the personal information as public consumption.

Aris05 31 / 22  
Aug 30, 2016   #2
Hai occa. I have some interesting feedback for you

... social networking is rapidly increaseincreasing in 21st century.

Italians is the highest users all over ...

The bad sides that directly impact to the future adolescents

That's it. I hope it can be helpful


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