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About photo booths: they allow to produce two kinds of picture, large format image and passport size


irhame 52 / 50 25  
Oct 7, 2015   #1
The diagram illustrates the process of using modern photo box. Overall, this machine allows costumer to produce two kinds of picture, large format image and passport-sized image. In any case, there are 8 main features that consisted of this photo booth.

Initially, costumers go into the photo booth with opening the curtain and closing it when he/she was inside the room. Before have a seat on controlled stool, he can use a mirror located above eye level for ensuring his appearance. After that, while he sits on that chair, adjustable stool and eye level should be settled to the right position. Then, wait for 3 seconds the light as a single flash will appear automatically. This mechanical photo box provides two buttons on the outside of the booth allowing user to select the photo's size, one large format and 4 photos sized passport with full colours. Eventually, the photos will be loaded for 1 minute before they are delivered outside.
Bayuwibowo 48 / 73 21  
Oct 8, 2015   #2
hey irhamme..

i cannot find "costumer" in any dictionary,
may be what that you mean is "customer".

Before havetake a seat on controlled stool

be settled toon the right position

wait for 3 seconds the light as a single flash will appear automatically
then wait for the flash light blinking automatically after 3 seconds.

Good luck!!
hope it helps.
vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Oct 8, 2015   #3
This is a very good report Irham. You managed to clearly state the process of taking a photo in the photo booth without missing a detail. Each paragraph is of an acceptable length and contains clear instructions, regardless of the imperfect grammar. We can work on polishing the report below:

of using A modern photo box

allows THE costumer to produce two kinds of pictureS,- watch out for those tricky plural forms and word connectors :-)

there are 8 main features that MAKE UP of this photo booth.

go into the photo booth with BY opening the curtain and closing it

Before have a seat SITTING on controlled stool,

eye level for TO ensuring CHECK his appearance

chair, THE adjustable stool and eye level should be settled to the right position.

Then, wait for 3 seconds the light as a single flash will appear automatically.
- AFTER 3 SECONDS THE PICTURE WILL BE TAKEN BY A SINGLE INSTANT FLASH OF LIGHT.

allowing THE user to select the photo's size,

the photos will be loaded DEVELOPED for 1 minute

By the way, you are lacking one more paragraph to meet the paragraph requirement of at least 3. You can split up the instructional portion of the report into 2 in order to attain that requirement.


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