Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.
More than what? I don't understand this either. Maybe they mean this: Playing sports teaches many life lessons.
So, you need to write an essay about how sports teach life lessons...
Use the present verb tense here:
In my personal life, I love sports, especially jogging, and I strongly
agree with the speaker's statement that playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life. I
believe that there are at least three things that sports can teach people as following.
Practice by reading each sentence allowed ten times. I believe that there are... I strongly agree with the... 10 times! :-)
Instead of writing "insist," I think you should write "persist." Or you can write "insist on success" but I think you mean persist.
When you are tired and feel cannot move a single step, if you insist on success, you will not only improve your muscle or running skill, but also you improve your spiritual power.--- very good sentence!! Spiritual power is a good concept.
that I experienced
while doing sports teaches me an important lesson which could
lead me to success, and I think the most important of these lessons is to insist on success.--- practice speaking and typing this sentence 10 times. I made a lot of corrections to it.
Doing ----> brings
Secondly, doing sports also brings people inspiration.
Good luck on the test! You make only small mistakes, and your meaning is always clear.
...knowing one's own body is definitely part of our lives.