in most modern societies , especially western countries , many communities lives together , different cultures , different origins , and different ways of life , so a pluralist society became a necessity , where a common and neutral law handle the relations between individuals , to avoid the problem of dominant/dominated problem.
we still today facing the problem of dominant community , I'll give an example by the situation of Muslim community in France , and i have to insist on the fact that here we are not addressing the issue of racism neither of human right , but some intellectuals by misunderstanding the notion of secularism define it like an assimilation of other ''new comers'' to the french tradition , it's became a problem when it deals with the manifestation of islam in the society , headscarf , prayers in the street of paris , butchers selling hallah meat ... all of those aspects create a kind of paranoia , like a mew age of Islamic invasion ...
we have to admit that the effort must be done on both sides , the muslim community should adapt its practices so as not to impose her style to other communities , but the rulers must must forge the laws to respect the pluralist society we are trying to build , secularism has never been the fact to erase any aspect of religion from society no , it's allow them all exist without a favoritism of one to an other .
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communities live and community lives :)
n most modern societies , especially western countries , many communities lives together in spite of their different cultures, origins and traditions, so a pluralist society became a necessity
Good suggestion Islam !we still today facing
We face , We are facing
Nowadays, we are still facing the problem of a dominant community,
Again a good suggestion :).... neither of human right
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