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Do you prefer using machines or doing work by hand? 'Machines are quite precise'



meili luo 4 / 5  
Sep 15, 2012   #1
Do you prefer using machines or doing work by hand?

There is a statement which says "Different people, different tastes". From my vantage point, I prefer to use machines rather than work by hand. Machines are always more precise than humans are, they work extremely fast, and they never feel tired.

The main reason for my propensity of using machines is that they are quite precise. Machines do not make any mistakes. They never get distracted from their work by any environmental disturbance. They have intensive focus on their jobs. Moreover, the progressive technology brings the machines more and more precision. Doctors, for example, tend to use robots for surgeries since robots enjoy accurateness up to micro and even nano scales.

Secondly, machines are much faster in comparison with humans. They do not need to make up their minds. They do not need to think of what to do since they are programmable. They may have electrical or hydraulic actuators which are up to twenty times as fast as human muscles. Furthermore, the machines are far more powerful than humans are. There are tremendous amounts of activities which can be accomplished by strong machines only.

Finally, machines are tireless. They can go on working twenty four hours a day and seven days a week. They do not have human limitations. They do not need food, they do not need rest, and they just continue to work as long as the external energy supply is provided. If you are a business owner, in order to be competitive with job market, you have to extensively utilize machines since they have the ability to produce consistently.

In spite of the undeniable fact that working with machines may have some risks, if all the mentioned factors are contemplated, the advantages of using machines outweigh the dangers of its. Consequently, according to my personality and fondness, we may safely reach the conclusion that using machines is a rather wise decision.

Isi 1 / 3  
Sep 15, 2012   #2
Machines are d easiest and fastest means of doing work yet are sometimes unreliable. They are d easiest being that it involve less stress. One can carry out different chores with the use of machines. For example instead of washing manually which usually is time consuming, machines makes it easier. A whole family's clothes can be washed quickly than when done manually Although it is time based it is preferable. It can be unreliable because its not all clothes that can be washed using machines. Another example is a mower. Instead of the manual method of clearing which is not only time consuming and stressful but also exhausting with the use of machine it will be easier and fastest. Machines make use of electricity (power supply) which makes its use futile wen its not available. In a laundry home for example an enterpreneur is sure to be at a loss unless there is constant supply of power. Just as there are work machines can carry out so also those hands can't do, though both work hand in hand. A machine can't just do the work itself less it knocks but need hands to assist in doing its work.
aysan - / 4  
Sep 15, 2012   #3
Hi dear meili lue
I really enjoyed your essay and I have learned a lot, just I have a question:

robots enjoy accurateness up to micro and even nano scales.

why u write " robot enjoy accurateness" ? Could we use the verb enjoy for lifeless objects? what is your idea about replacing the sentence with this:

since robots involve accuracy up to micro and nano scales
thank you for you well structured essay
Shay87 2 / 3  
Sep 15, 2012   #4
Some of your sentences seems inaccurate and unnecessary. For example: Machines do not make any mistakes. (Technically not true they do make mistakes, mostly because of the person operating with said machine. Majority of the machines used in the daily life of work needs maintenance and people to operate.) Also, 'since robots enjoy accurateness' (How exactly do you know that they enjoy accurateness?) Though you have made some good points in your paper, there are quite a bit that can be argued.


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