IELTS1: process by which academic books are published

IELTS Academic Task 1:
Writing task: The flow chart below shows the process by which academic books are published. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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My report:

The flow chart illustrates the process of publishing academic books.

First, a publisher needs to research the market so as to know which subjects are in demand and if there is any competition. Then, the decision has to be made whether submitted manuscript ought to be selected or authors for new material should be sought after. When the manuscript is submitted, it is then reviewed by the readers and the best project is chosen for commission. If any corrections are needed, a manuscript is sent back to the author so that its final version meets given criteria.

If the publication is likely to be a financial success, a marketing strategy is prepared to encourage more people to buy the book. After the price is set and decisions concerning distribution are made, the books is sent to warehouse and then published.

However, if the book is not likely to bring financial profit, the whole process should be repeated.

Thank you in advance for any suggestions concerning my IELTS report :)

The flow chart illustrates the process of publishing academic books.I'd rather usedscientific or course books.

First, a publisher needsI guess it should be modal verb without ending-s to research the market so as to know which subjects are in demand and if there is any competition. Then, the decision has to be madeI'd sayThere are two options to escape repetition. whether submitted manuscript ought to be selected or authors for new material should be sought after. WhenThe next stage the manuscript is submitted, it is then reviewed by the readers and the best project is chosen for commission. If any corrections are needed, a manuscript is sent back to the author so that its final version meets given criteria.

IfIn a case the publication is likely to be a financial success, a purposely designed marketing strategy is prepared to encourage more people to buy the book. After the price is set and decisions concerning distribution are made, the books is sent to a warehouse and then published.

However, if the book is not likely to bring financial profit, the whole process should be repeated.
WELL done KUDOS!!!! Excellent vocabulary !

Thank you very much, tarhuna16!

Where is the flow chart? It's good to upload all the diagrams so that others can refer to them while making comments on your writing. You can use the "Attach file(s)" feature in the Message block for that purpose.


... this is good for the introduction.
Generally this is the structure we recommend to follow;
1. Introduction (you've done it well)
2. Overview (A brief overview highlighting the main trends or features)
3. Details (give more details and statistics)