The process of Active Study contains both individual and group work.

Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer?

The process of Active Study contains both individual and group work.

First part is about me and my own study habits . I need some private time to study , analyze , and maybe , memorize some lessons. A quiet , simple room gives me a great condition of concentration. I can have a break whenever i want or eat some snacks . students have different time tables so they all need to spend their own specific time with their books and notes they have taken in the class to make an image of the topics in their minds.

now it is time for me to see other people's perspectives . I can share my opinions with others and listen to their different and sometimes innovative ideas.

Tow brains work better than one when they help each other solve a math problem or dissect philosophical issues , and that only happens in a group study.

Heida, while the essay that you wrote is quite direct to the point and instantly answers the prompt, you need to learn how to follow the correct writing format for an essay in order to make it academically acceptable to the reviewer / examiner / teacher. There is a standard format that you have to follow which goes like this:

1. Introduction - restate the thesis prompt in your own words then state your point of view regarding the topic at the end of the paragraph.

2. Body of paragraphs - usually around 2 paragraphs. For your essay, 2 paragraphs will do. You have the right idea here. First you presented your point of view in support of your stand, then you presented the opposing point of view.

3. Conclusion - this is missing from your essay. Without the wrap up that includes a summary of the discussion and a restatement of your point of view, the essay will not properly close.

I strongly suggest that you revise your introduction and develop a proper conclusion for your essay so that it will follow the correct format and be more informative for the reader. The rest of the revisions of the essay can be attended to once you come up with a better essay. You currently have the chance to do that.

By the way, the saying is "Two heads are better than one", not "Tow brains work better than one" :-) I know, it is confusing English idiom. I'm glad you thought of using one though, it lightened the mood of your written work.