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A process which is from IELTS examination first part



elvis_pelvis 1 / 1  
Feb 15, 2016   #1
The diagram illustrates the process of producing concrete cement-making and the process of use of cement for building purposes. There are a total seven stages in cement production and main two stages in concrete production, beginning with limestone and clay are crushed and culminating in concrete mixer.

To begin, limestone and clay are crushed together by crusher. Then, powder is put in mixer. Next, powder is heated by rotating heater. Following this, powder is turned into cement by used gender. In the end of the this process cement is put in bags to make it easy to carry.

In concrete production stage, four elements are used. %15 cement, %10 water, %25 sand and %50 gravel are put in concrete mixer and they are mixed same time. Finally, they create concrete to use for building purposes.

NourNour 22 / 37  
Feb 15, 2016   #2
Hi, Elves. Obviously, this is your first post, so you are not familiar with how this forum works. In order to get feedbacks for your essay, you should attach the diagram's picture.
OP elvis_pelvis 1 / 1  
Feb 15, 2016   #3
NourNour thanks for your answer! Yes, you are right, it is my first essay on this website. I added it. Thanks for your interest :)


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ammus1 10 / 29  
Feb 16, 2016   #4
There are two diagrams so u have to write ,The diagrams illustrate and start with a word 'overall' when u write overview para ...


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