A professional baseball player

Famous, Talented and Rich

A professional baseball player is many people's dream, it is not about sport only but also another things, such as Famous, Talented and Rich, mostly a professional baseball who has more skill are in elite club, sometimes their match are interested to watch, many people come from far away just to watch their match, it doesn't matter how expensive the ticket is caise they are so excited to watch it

Talk about professional baseball player many small club starting to the next level, they follow the elite tournament and professional tournament, they try to make thier club become bigger and famous because they believe if their club is bigger with many professional player it can increase their income and that is positive thing to their club itself

Rafiq, you are getting your English terms mixed up in this essay. The correct sentence is "Many people dream of playing professional baseball". That is just one of the serious mistakes you made in reference to the sport in your essay. Unfortunately, there are too many of these errors for me to correct so I will just leave you with just one sample of the properly written sentence.

You have also shown that you are sometimes not capable of spelling the English terms properly such as "Caise" instead of "because". The whole essay sounds like a writing exercise that you did not even take an effort to properly write. You capitalized the words famous, talented, and rich when these are not proper nouns nor used at the start of a sentence and therefore, should be written in lowercase letter. That is a standard English writing rule that you have chosen to disregard in your writing.

I understand that you are not a native English speaker and you are just learning the language at the moment. It is important the you take great pains to properly write in English if you are to improve your writing skills. Use an online language corrector if you must. Those can help you learn to proper sentence structure and grammar usage of words. More simple English writing exercises and an increase in English reading material will also help in that regard.

At this point, your essay is not an acceptable first effort because you did not even try to write this properly. If you had typed this in MS word, you would have even instantly gotten assistance from the bundled grammar checker, which you should not ignore as it can help you learn how to write in English more effectively as well.