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GRE WRITING: In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge



nav3057 3 / 3  
Feb 23, 2016   #1
Imagination of an individual provide a path to work upon and make things go smoothly. Almost in every field it is required, it gives a clear cut demarcation between an ordinary person and a visionary. Right from doing mundane works to highly arduous tasks, imagination and creativity helps in making that task easier.Its not only limited to professional and academic fields, without imagination life of a person will becomes dull.

Famoust artists like Picaso, Da Vinci, Bob Marley reached the paragon of their field because of their imagination not because of knowledge in their particular field. Mere bookish knowledge about art, music, engineering would not make marvelous piece of work, imagination is critical to create that bookish knowledge into reality. Wonders of the world like Tajmahal, Great wall of china, Pyramids and others, are extraordinary works in engineering and master piece in pure aesthetic way, only because of imagination of people to build great structures.

Famous business empire today, are because of the imagination of their founders to make their name a brand at global market. People like Steve Jobs and his vision to provide something different, something unique to customers built the whole market share of Apple Inc. Imagination is key point of innovation, with current market filled with plethora of sundry electronic devices. Only new and different products would survive the cut throat competition. Competitors like Samsung, Apple and Nokia rely mainly on innovation to beat each other.

However, imagination without knowledge will be futile. All the CEO's of famouse company share one commen factor, that is they are imaginative, but other factor that they share is they all are well versed in thier particular field. Founder of Facebook, Mark Zuckerburg is very imaginative, but without knowledge of coding, he would not have built a company that is spread across boundaries. Conclusively, both imagination and knowledge are complementary to each other. Both should go hand in hand, with only one of the characteristic, one can not excel.

Crystal812 23 / 55  
Feb 23, 2016   #2
imagination and creativity helps in making that task easier.

without imagination, life of a person will becomes dull.

Great wall of C hina

master pieces in pure aesthetic way

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... something different, something unique to customers, built the whole ...

in thier their particular field

have built a company that is spreads across boundaries


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