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Programming bacteria to detect cancer (and maybe treat it)


PHA2016 39 / 62 4  
Oct 11, 2016   #1
Nowadays, technology made big change entire human life. It used rapidly and computer involved by scientist to create more innovation. For example computer program able to assist Bacteria to detect cancer inside human body. An explanation from researcher, Tal Danino said that bacteria can help human to detect cancer even another disease. He developed a software where it can write algorithm DNA inside the Bacteria. This program can communicate with Bacteria molecule. The method was bacteria synchronize together and then grew up as a colony. Then, the program assisted the colony to spread out to detect disease that phenomena he called a supernova. Interestingly his program Bacteria grew naturally in human body and sent signal to the machine and the detect cancer or treat. It will be benefit to detect cancer and other disease in the future. His vision has technology can support in human life.

Source: TED, Tal Danino

fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Oct 11, 2016   #2
Hello
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==> ... to detect cancer inside (a) human body.
==>An explanation from (a) researcher, Tal Danino (...) to detect cancer even another disease(this sentence tend to make me confuse) .
==> He developed a software where(which) it can write algorithm ...
==> ... assisted the colony (in spreading out to detect disease that phenomenon ...)(to spread out to detect disease that phenomena he called a supernova. )
==> ... Bacteria grew naturally in (the) human body and sent (a) signal to the machine and the detect(ed) cancer or treat. It will be (a) benefit to detect cancer and other disease(s) in the future.

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