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The proportion of dramatic, fantasy films and comedies - Mix Bar graphs



linhiu 1 / -  
2 days ago   #1
The first bar graph illustrates how films in different genres were produced and the other graph how cinema tickets were sold in a nation from 1996 to 2000.
Overall, there was an increase in the proportion of dramatic, fantasy films and comedies released; meanwhile, an opposite trend was seen in the figures for romantic films. Additionally, the percentage of romantic movie tickets witnessed a decline while comedy consistently constituted the highest figure throughout the period.
The proportion of dramatic films created started at about 26%, after which it experienced a slight growth to 35% in 2000. Similar changes, but to lesser extents, can be seen in the figures for comedies and fantasy films, which rose from 20% in 1996 to just under 25% in 2000 and from around 12% to 21% in the final year, respectively. Meanwhile, the percentage of romantic movies remained unchanged throughout the period examined, at upwards of 5%.
5% of movie tickets sold in 1996 were romantic film tickets, with a subsequent decrease to approximately 2% after 4 years. The figures for dramatic, fantasy movie tickets saw opposite changes, growing from 16% and 3% in 1996 to shy of 18% and 8% in 2000, respectively. Similarly, comedy sales increased slightly from exactly 20% in the first year to 23% after 4 years.





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2 days ago   #2
The essay is overwritten at 207 words. The maximum allowable word count for the task 1 essay is 200 words. You will be cutting into the task 2 writing time during an actual test when you write a very long analytical essay. It is important that you properly allot writing time for each essay test type because if you leave either of the essays open ended, you will end up with an automatic failing score.

Your summary overview should be split into 2 sentences since you are presenting 2 different image information. There is an English writing rule that each sentence should focus on a single idea presentation only. That is why you have to separate the information presentation. You are required to clearly differentiate between image information because run-on sentences will result in a failing paragraph score.


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