IELTS writing task 1_ Proportion of teachers as per gender in 6 different types

The chart demonstrates the proportion of teachers of 2 sexes in 6 different types of educational setting in England in 2010.
As can be seen from the chart, the percentage of women teachers in nursery/ pre-school made up about 95%, significantly higher than men teachers with only 4%. Moreover, it was the same in primary school with over 90% women and approximately 10% men teachers. Similarly, this figure of women teachers were slightly higher than this of men by 5%

On the other hand, men teachers, who are likely to teach in higher educational levels, accounted for over a half in private training institute as well as university. Fortunately, both males and females reached the same rate of 50% in college.

In conclusion, more women teachers tended to be in nursery/ pre-school , primary and also secondary school while men made up high proportion in private training institute and university

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Is this about secondary school teachers? You didn't mention any stage of education here.


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I think female teachers and male teachers sound better



-> Besides, Furthermore,...
Also you forgot to attach your chart.
I hope these help!

First, you should attach the chart or the table by using the feature "Attach file(s)" together with your response to IELTS Task1 if you wish to earn better feed backs. Do it next time!


... I prefer if you said;
"the male and female teachers" instead of saying "teachers of 2 sexs"


... Since this is a report, keep your writing very concise and short;
As per the chart / According to the chart
Nothing wrong with your structure :)

thanks for helping me!!!