[IELTS Task1] The proportion of women's and men's driving test pass rates in one Asian country

[IELTS Task1] Driving test pass rates

The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.

The bar chart compares the proportion of women's and men's driving test passed in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.

It is clear from bar chart that women have a higher proportion of driving test passed than men in one Asian country throughout the period shown.

In 1980, the percentage of women who passed driving test stood at around 50%, while the proportion of men passing driving test just were under 30%. Over the following 20 years, the percentage of passing driving test both for women and men that showed an upward trend. Also, the figures of women and men succeeding driving examinations rose by around 20%.

Between 2000 and 2010, there were little changes in the percentage of women and men who succeeded driving examination. The percentage of women passing driving exam fell slightly by around 2%. On the other hand, the figures of men were the same, at about 50%.

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