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I read the note from my mom;Home alone - essay


thaoquyen 2 / 3  
Feb 27, 2012   #1
This is about when I were home alone, but I cannot writen it well, so Please help with my grammar!! Thanks ^^

Home Alone

One day in the morning, I woke up and looked around my house to find my parents, and ask them what are for breakfast. I couldn't find them; I thought they were still sleeping in their bedroom, then I go into the kitchen to find something to eat. Then I saw on the table there was a note and food for my breakfast; I read the note from my mom, and it said I have to stay home alone for two days with 300 dollars in cash, because they have to go to my aunt house to help her with the wedding party. I was so surprised because it is my first time to stay at home alone by myself.

Eating my breakfast, and thinking I'll be fine, that's okay it just only two days, and I can handle all the work I have to do as my mom does. After finished with my breakfast I have to wash the dishes then go to the market to buy food. I went to the market and I was don't know what to buy or eat for dinner; so I just go around the market and I bought some noodles to make Vietnamese's noodles. I get into my house and to the kitchen to cook dinner. The true is I don't really know how to make it, I want to ask my mom but I don't have a SIM card in my phone because it was broke. I was trying to go on the Google to search the noodles that I want to cook. In 3o minutes I was looking for it, and lucky I am saw a video that can teach me how to cook it step by step.

This also my first time to cook dinner by myself, so I want it to be look attractive and taste good, because of that I have to watching the video more carefully and remember all the steps. After watching the video, I trying to cook the noodles and preparing everything I needed to make the noodles. When I making the noodles, I always remembered about what my mom said when I watching she making meals, she said "When we cooking or making food, we have to think all about love and beautiful things, so our food can be more delicious." So I always thinking about beautiful things that in my mind and with all my heart into the noodles that I am tried hard to make. Finally, my noodles can dessert in 30 minutes after I cooked it; I sat down on the chair and eating my noodles; it was tastes good and very delicious. That's made me so proud of myself, and about what my mom have taught me. Suddenly; my bell-door rang, I was open the door and saw my little cousin coming to my house to play with me. He was younger than me, but I'm so happy because I have someone to stay and play with. I was sharing my noodles with him and playing some games with him. We both played a game call Quick hands, Quick eyes. It is was really fun, and it makes me not being scare anymore about to stay home alone.

For a while; I heard something was go into my front yard, it sounds so scared. Me; and my cousin were quietly and go to the living-room, I saw someone was looking over my house like they have been drunk. My cousin and I were really scared and cries, but we both still look at that person to see what does he wants to do. Suddenly, he was hit into my door and yelling like a crazy man tried to hit someone. I started to cry, but my cousin is not. He put his hand on my shoulder and said "Don't be scare sister, I'll be right here with you."

"Really, thanks." I said with a nervous face. "Why are you don't cry?"
"Hmm, I do not scary about that at all." He said.
Finally the man was going away. I felt like my cousin is my hero in that night, and he was strong seen he just my little cousin but he helped me to not be scare and cry. Next morning, my parents were home soon because they were worry about me and the house. I tell them everything happened last night, they were really suprise about my cousin and happy that we both are safe.

It is a first time I was stay at home alone without my parents, and my feeling was really scared and I was really missed my parents when they are gone. However, I having learn something new in my life that I know how to cook Vietnamese's noodles, and be strong whenever I scared.
Michelluu 2 / 3  
Feb 29, 2012   #2
ome Alone

One morning I woke up and could not find my parents in the house. First I thought they were still asleep, but when I went to the kitchen I saw that my breakfast was on the table, and also a brief note from my mother. My mother informed me that I have to stay at home alone, as she needed to help her sister to organise a wedding party. My mother left $300 for me.

This took me with surprise at is was the first time that I stayed at home alone. Whilst eating my breakfast, I convinced myself that everything will be alright and I also thought about all the household chores I need to do in the absence of my mother. After breakfast, I did the washing up and went to the market in order to buy food. As I didn't know by then what I wanted to cook for dinner, I just had a stroll around in order to gather some ideas. At the end I bought some noodles so that I could bake Vietnamese noodles for dinner. As I didn't know how to cook those noodles, I researched a recipe via google for 30 minutes, and at the end I found a video which demonstrated step-by-step how to cook the noodles

. This was the first time I cooked a dinner for myself and I wanted it to look pretty. Just as it looked in the video, and just as my mother tought me. She always says:

"When we cooking or making food, we have to think all about love and beautiful things, so our food can be more delicious."

So, whilst cooking I was thinking about beautiful things, and I also cooked with all my heart. After 30 mins the noodles were ready to eat and I was very pleased with the result, as the noodles tasted delicious.. That's made me so proud of myself, and also about what my mom has taught me. All of the sudden the door-bell rang. My little cousin came in order to play with me. He was younger than me, but was happy that he kept me company. I was sharing my noodles with him and later we played some games. We played a game called Quick hands, Quick eyes. It is was really fun, and it made me feel not scared anymore of being alone at home.

Hey Quen, I corrected the first part. Hope that helps!
AmberAngel 4 / 13  
Mar 18, 2012   #3
Hello ^^
You have a fair bit of grammatical errors, so try to brush up on that.

One day in the morning, I woke up and looked around my house to find my parents, and ask them what are for breakfast. I couldn't find them; I thought they were still sleeping in their bedroom, and then I went into the kitchen to find something to eat. Then I saw on the table there was a note and a plate of food for my breakfast; I read the note from my parents, and it said I have to stay at home alone for two days because they have to go to my aunt house to help her with her wedding party and I was given 300 dollars to get me through these two days. I was so surprised because it is my first time to stay at home alone by myself.

Eating my breakfast, and thinking I'll be fine, that's okay it just only two days, and I can handle all the work I have to do like my mom. After I finished my breakfast, I have to wash the dishes and head to the market to buy groceries for my meals. I went to the market and I was at loss on what to buy for dinner; so I just walk around the market and bought some noodles to make Vietnamese's noodles. I went back to my house to cook dinner. The truth is I don't really know how to make it, I want to ask my mom but I don't have a SIM card in my phone because it broke. I tried going on Google to search for the recipe of the noodles I want to make. After searching for 30 minutes, I was lucky to have found a video that can teach me how to cook it step by step.

This is also my first time I am cooking dinner by myself, so I want it to be look attractive and make sure it taste good, because of that, I watched the video carefully and remember all the steps. After watching the video, I tried to cook the noodles and prepare everything I need to make the noodles. When I was making the noodles, I always remembered about what my mom said when I was watching her cook meals; she said "When we are cooking or making food, we have to think all about love and beautiful things, so our food can be more delicious." So I thought about beautiful things that are in my mind and with all my heart into the noodles that I am trying very hard to make. Finally, my noodles can dessert in 30 minutes after I cooked it;[rephrase] I sat down on the chair and ate my noodles; it tastes good and very delicious. I am so proud of myself, and what my mom have taught me. Suddenly, my doorbell rang, I opened the door and saw my little cousin standing outside, wanting to play with me. He was younger than me, but I'm so happy because I have someone to play with. I shared my noodles with him and playing some games with him. We both played a game called Quick hands, Quick eyes. It is really fun, and it makes me not to feel scared about having to stay home alone.

For a while; I heard something going into my front yard, it sound scary. My cousin and I were quietly creeping into the living room and saw someone looking over my house like they have been drunk. My cousin and I were really scared and cried a little, but we both still look at that person to see what he wants to do. Suddenly, he hit my door and started yelling like a crazy man trying to hit someone. I started to cry, but my cousin did not. He pat me on my shoulder and said "Don't be scare sister, I'll be right here with you."

"Really, thanks." I said with a nervous face. "Why didn't you cry?"
"Hmm, I do not feel scared at all." He said.
Finally the man was walking away. I felt my cousin is my hero that night, and he was strong seen he just my little cousin but he helped me to not be scare and cry.[I don't understand your point.] Next morning, my parents were home soon because they were worry about me and the house. I told them everything happened last night, they were really surprised about my cousin's visitation and happy that we are both safe.

It is my first time I was staying at home alone without my parents, and I was feeling really scared and I really missed my parents when they are gone. However, I learnt how to cook Vietnamese's noodles, and most importantly, to be brave and be strong whenever I feel scared.

Hope this helps!
diyman21 - / 3  
Mar 19, 2012   #4
hi thaoquyen
ı wonder that when this happend how old were you?


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