Task 1- How to Recycle Your Old Newspaper to a Valuable New Paper

The recycling process of old newspapers into paper is described in the given diagram. Generally, it can be noticed that nine steps should be completed to turn a paper waste into a new white recycled paper.

The process is started with tearing the newspaper up into pieces. Subsequently, the pieces placed in a bowl is poured 250 ml of water and left for an hour in order to soften it like a porridge. The porridge-like paper, then, is stirred by using an electric mixer for 45 seconds. Afterward, the well-mixed paper is spread in a tray with adding 100 ml of liquefied flour to make a paper dough. Prior to covering with mesh in the top of the paper dough, it should be solidified manually by hand. The mesh function is filtering the porridge from excess water and making it compact. Having been compacted, the porridge is molded into paper by rolling pin. Finally, the paper is dried with sufficient heat from the sun for a day.

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Hi Lita, as this may serm to be an easy diagram, the trick is to be able to explain it in a way that is understood by a general reader. Moreover, the key to a successful diagram or process is tp be able to communicate it to the reader.

Now, your process of elaborating the diagram is in a very efficient manner, a manner where the reader is able to follow the process step by step without missing a turn. As I mentioned, this is a diagram that is rather a simple one but if not explained properly will be a very complicated one.

I mist say good work and keep it up!
For future reference, make sure that you keep the same clean and simple approach to your essay, the words you use should be conversational, easy to comprehend and more importantly, apt to the English language standards.