This is report to describe the process of collecting information for the weather forecast

Hello, can you give me all your suggestions about my 20 minutes writing task?

The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

This is the report to describe the process of collecting information by producing the up-to-the-minute weather forecast you can rely on.
The weather forecast is made on the basis of incoming information collected from 3 types of sources: from space, from ground and from water. The information from space is received by satellites. Besides the data from space, synoptics get the information from above ground meteorological stations by means of radars. The data from water are captured by drifting buoys and then reflected on synoptic charts. In order to produce reliable forecasts meteorologists analyze the primary infos such as: satellite photos, radar screen and synoptic charts. All this is compiled and transmitted to the broadcasting center to prepare the broadcast.

Finally, the weather broadcast is broadcasted through TV, radio and telephone number information system. Thus, we get to know the up-to-the-minute weather forecast via news and telephone services.

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This is the report to describe the process of collecting information by the Australian Bureau of Meteorologybyin producing the up-to-the-minute weather forecast you can rely on.

The weather forecast is made on the basis of incoming information collected from 3 types of sources: from space, from ground and from water. The information from space is received by satellites. Besides the data from space, synoptics get the information from above ground meteorological stations by means of radars. The data from water are captured by drifting buoys and then reflected on synoptic charts. In order to produce reliable forecasts meteorologists analyze the primary infos such as: satellite photos, radar screen and synoptic charts. All data are compiled and transmitted to the broadcasting center to prepare the broadcast.

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your essay is clear and understandable. but a trivial mistake with "by" in the first paragraph can be fatal since it is potential to divert the meaning.

it is less than 150 words, as i count that is only 148 words. we never know the tolerance that is given by the examiner, but i suggest to not write less than 150.

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So, below are my corrections on your analysis.
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- telephone number information system.

There you have it Maxim, I hope this corrections on your analysis, helps and is able to provide you with a far better analysis.

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