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The given pie chart below shows the adult numeracy competencies in 24 different countries.
Overall, the result of numeracy skill was different in each country. According to the data, we can classify them into 3 cluster; lower by 15 point, middle by 15-20, and the over by 2 point. Then, every condition in each group is interesting to see more.
Firstly, the lower groups contain with 8 countries, and dominated by countries from European continent. The motion of numeracy skills in this group is around 15 point to the low of trough point of whole measure.
Secondly, the middle cluster is more fascinating, Japan whom came from Asian continent achieved good numeracy skill for their folk paralleize with other 8 developed countries in Europe. However this is a nice to see while Japan could be compete in the numeracy among developed country in the world.
Lastly, the result survey earn that the highest group with 6 countries have more variety with continents involved. It is United States from America, Ireland-Germany-UK-Spain from Europe, and Korea representative Asia. The topmost expert population in numeracy is attained by US by 2,7 point. Whereas Korea, achieve 2,2 poin and also sign as the only Asian country which stand in the highest cluster.
In the nutshell, whereas based on quantity countries out of Europe are less, their inhabitants strongly enough in numeracy skill, indeed.
The given pie chart below shows the adult numeracy competencies in 24 different countries.
Overall, the result of numeracy skill was different in each country. According to the data, we can classify them into 3 cluster; lower by 15 point, middle by 15-20, and the over by 2 point. Then, every condition in each group is interesting to see more.
Firstly, the lower groups contain with 8 countries, and dominated by countries from European continent. The motion of numeracy skills in this group is around 15 point to the low of trough point of whole measure.
Secondly, the middle cluster is more fascinating, Japan whom came from Asian continent achieved good numeracy skill for their folk paralleize with other 8 developed countries in Europe. However this is a nice to see while Japan could be compete in the numeracy among developed country in the world.
Lastly, the result survey earn that the highest group with 6 countries have more variety with continents involved. It is United States from America, Ireland-Germany-UK-Spain from Europe, and Korea representative Asia. The topmost expert population in numeracy is attained by US by 2,7 point. Whereas Korea, achieve 2,2 poin and also sign as the only Asian country which stand in the highest cluster.
In the nutshell, whereas based on quantity countries out of Europe are less, their inhabitants strongly enough in numeracy skill, indeed.
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