response paragraph for the essay "why we crave horror movies"

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In the essay "why we crave horror movies", Steven king explored why people usually crave horror by using the cause effect method. King began his essay by a bold opening statement "we are all mentally sick. This opening statement caught many readers' attention so it was a good hook. I believe that this statement showed insult for some readers and that if it had little truth, it would have opposed his argument. Steven revealed that people's reactions towards movies are normal and are not sicknesses. I think that king's ideas were not really well stated. For instance, he well presented the causes to craving horror movies but, unfortunately he presented the effects indirectly which made the reader search for them throughout the passage. Steven king wrote this essay according to his point of view. What was stated in the essay were not facts but opinions.

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1.Steven king explored why people usually crave horror, by using the cause effect method.
2."we are all mentally sick."
3.Steven revealed that people's reaction towards movies are normal and are not sickness.
4. I think that King's

In the essay "Why We Crave Horror Movies," Steven king explores why people usually crave horror by using the cause effect method. King begins his essay with a bold opening statement: "We are all mentally sick. This opening statement caught many readers' attention so it was a good hook. I believe that this statement showed insult for some readers and that if it had little truth, it would have opposed his argument. King reveals that people's reactions towards movies are normal and are not sicknesses. I think that his ideas were not really well stated. ...

Very good! Just those few errors. When you review a work, write it all in the present tense. For example: "King explains that we are all mentally ill"... instead of "King explained..."

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Response Paragraph
Narrator's Ideas
In the essay "Why We Crave Horror Movies", Steven king explores why people usually crave horror by using the cause effect method. King begins his essay with a bold opening statement "We are all mentally sick. This opening statement caught many readers' attention so it was a good hook. I believe that this statement showed insult for some readers and that if it had little truth, it would have opposed his argument. King reveals that people's reactions towards movies are normal and are not sicknesses. I think his ideas were not really well stated. For instance, he well presents the causes to craving horror movies but, unfortunately he presents the effects indirectly which makes the reader search for them throughout the passage. Steven king wrote this essay according to his point of view. What are stated in the essay are not facts but opinions.