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Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my country, while men are often working outside home, women are responsible for bringing the children up. However, in new world's society woman's role is change, the large number of women working outside home. This essay will discuss who should be responsible for bringing their children up.
I definitely agree with this idea. Father should be responsible for bringing the children up as same as mother. Both father and mother are the most important people for their youngsters and they are the first and the best teacher for their children.
Bringing the children up is the most important task for both father and mother. They should do this important duty together. Besides, in the extend family the kin should participate in this hard tasks too. Everybody in family has their own important role. These roles are affecting their children. I strongly believe that more time you staying together and more activities you do together---watching TV, cooking and playing games and so on, could encourage family's attachment and binding. Moreover, the strongly relationship of family could reduce many problems such as family's problem, learning's problem and also social's problem. From my experience, when I was young my father often went outside and has only little time to stay with me. Sometimes I fell sad and melancholy. I want much more time to stay with him and talk with him. In fact, money cannot buy something like love and happiness in your family.
All of the reasons show in this essay, changing your opinion and bringing your children up together will make more beneficial. Both father and mother have strengths and skills that are important for children's psychological growth.
Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In my country, while men are often working outside home, women are responsible for bringing the children up. However, in new world's society woman's role is change, the large number of women working outside home. This essay will discuss who should be responsible for bringing their children up.
I definitely agree with this idea. Father should be responsible for bringing the children up as same as mother. Both father and mother are the most important people for their youngsters and they are the first and the best teacher for their children.
Bringing the children up is the most important task for both father and mother. They should do this important duty together. Besides, in the extend family the kin should participate in this hard tasks too. Everybody in family has their own important role. These roles are affecting their children. I strongly believe that more time you staying together and more activities you do together---watching TV, cooking and playing games and so on, could encourage family's attachment and binding. Moreover, the strongly relationship of family could reduce many problems such as family's problem, learning's problem and also social's problem. From my experience, when I was young my father often went outside and has only little time to stay with me. Sometimes I fell sad and melancholy. I want much more time to stay with him and talk with him. In fact, money cannot buy something like love and happiness in your family.
All of the reasons show in this essay, changing your opinion and bringing your children up together will make more beneficial. Both father and mother have strengths and skills that are important for children's psychological growth.
