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Bunglon11 28 / 31  
Feb 26, 2016   #1
The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


A breakdown of a detailed wind turbine design and three different locations to be placed is illustrated in the diagrams. Overall, a wind turbine consists of several parts, which has their each function and there are three locations where the turbines can be constructed. While the highest power is on the hill, the lowest is next to houses as a domestic turbine.

The design, a wind turbine feature consists of blader made by fibreglass or wood, a steel tower, a wind sensor, a generator, and a computer control system. Each part of the turbine has a function such blades as a receiver of wind. Then, wind sensor acts to detect speed and direction which is followed by a generator as a power producer with output 1,5 megawatts of electricity. Moreover, another component is a computer to control the system and receive information from the sensor. All parts are combined to construct a wind turbine.

Moving to the locations, there are three different locations where the turbines can be established. The first, on the hill, in this place the maximum wind strength can be obtained. The second, it is in the sea where landscape does not spoil the process in order to receive the wind source, and another place is around the houses as a domestic turbine that is able to produce 100 kilowatts electricity.


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putri22 33 / 32  
Feb 26, 2016   #2
A breakdown of a detailed wind turbine design and three different locations to be placed isare illustrated in the diagrams. Overall, a wind turbine consists of several parts, which hashave their each function and there ...

Turning to the design, a wind turbine feature consists of bladers made by fibreglass or wood, a steel ...

i think there were just a few little mistakes. good job, hadi!


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