When I got a little older specially
when I was inas I entered high school I liked playinginterested in computer games a lotl
When I got older
I wanted to
haveget a girlfriend but
I think u cannot consider "getting a gf" as a hobby.
I didn't find courage
The word "confidence" is a better word.
gainbring you something valuable
Here are my new hobbies:
Write about your new hobbies in a separate paragraph.
I simply note new words and statements and surprisingly I use them right now while I am writing this articleIs this an essay? If the answer is YES, U should consider the following points :
1) each essay includes an introduction. Start the introduction with a motivator, then write the thesis statement and the main idea of the essay.
2) organize the ideas of the essay. For example, u wrote about your previous and present hobbies. So, write the previous hobbies in one Para. and allocate another Para. to the present hobbies.
3) Write a conclusion: Restate the thesis statement and finally write a clincher (ending statement.
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