Science Qualification in Malaysia and Singapore - IELTS Task 1

Question :
The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.

The bar graph informs the qualifications of people who hold a science qualification in Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, it is noticeable that a significantly low proportion of people hold science qualifications, that is Master's and Bachelor's degree in science from universities level studies. The highest percentage in both countries was the people who do not have specialization in science.

A closer looks to the data reveals that in Malaysia, people who does not have qualification in science was the highest percentage around 60 %, while scholars in Master's degree saw the lowest proportion around 3%. Bachelor's degree is the second lowest (10%), and people who leaving school exams in the second highest (35%).

A part from previous comparison, in Singapore 60% people who does not involved in science. People from universities stage in Singapore, that is Master's and Bachelor's degree have low percentage of science qualification, approximately 3% for Master's degree and Bachelor's degree obtained 20%.

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There you have it Fayna, I hope the above remarks helped and is valuable to your revision.

Hi Dina,

- The bar graph informs the qualifications of people ...
The bar graph shows the number of the people who had science qualification and divided into 4 different groups in Malaysia and Singapore.
- In the overview do not put the lowest number as the most important highlight. you should use the highest number to attract the reader.
- In the body paragraph you should use comparative sentence, not only tell the graph one by one but also compare it.

Hopefully it helps.