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Some scientists from University of Oxford released result of study about the future of work


fauzankrn 16 / 23 3  
Oct 11, 2016   #1
The jobs we'll lose to machines - and the ones we won't (TED Summary)

Some scientists from University of Oxford released result of study about the future of work. They concluded that almost one in every two job have a high risk of being automated by machines. As we know, machine have power to learn everything from data and process it same as like what human do. On the past few years, machine learning grow rapidly to able doing more complex tasks. People will have no chance to compete with machines on frequent or high-volume tasks. But we still have something that machines can not do, it is tackle novel situations. So, whatever people decide to do, let every day bring a new challenge therefore we still can stay ahead of the machines.

by Anthony Goldbloom
Source: TED

Asma Raj 6 / 10  
Oct 11, 2016   #2
Hello Fauzankrn,
I would like to give some correction on your essay.

machine has power to learn everything from data.

..., machine learning grows rapidly to be able ...

... that machines cannot do, it is tackles novel situations."

Please make sure how to use singular and plural noun, and also about subject-verb agreement. I hope my corrections help your next essay better.

Keep writing Fauzankrn :)
fauziyahtami 22 / 38 6  
Oct 11, 2016   #3
Hello Fauzan
Hope you doing well, lemme give you some advice.

==> Some scientists from (the) University of Oxford released (the) result of study about
==> ... almost one in every two job(s) have a high risk of ...
==> As we know, machine(s) have (the) power to learn ...
==> .., machine learning grow(s) rapidly to able doing ...
==> ... that machines can not (afford to) do, it is
==> ... bring a new challenge(,) therefore we still can stay

*be aware with singular and plural.
*learn about where you need "the"

Overall, you have done great
Good luck and keep writing :)


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