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Security Concerns of Pakistan / Foreign Policy



afzi16113 1 / -  
Jul 23, 2012   #1
Introduction
Security Concerns
1. Cross border attacks and Suicide Attack from the Taliban
2. USA: Drone attack and violation of Pakistani Sovereignty by 2 may and 24 october attacks.
3. Indian infiltration in Baluchistan
Measure to revisiting Foreign Policy
1. Keep aloof from war on terror
2. Consensus of Politician and Army over Drone Attacks and violation of sovereignty
3. Prevention of Indian role in the Baluchistan via effective diplomatic channel

Pakistan has fought three war since its inception. The war of 1947 over Kashmir was the first and Second war of 1971 lead to the dismemberment of East Pakistan. In 1999, Kargil was another adventure laid by the Indian Army against Pakistan.

From 1948 to 1979, Pakistan remained the key alliance of USA. After the disintegration of Soviet Union, American left Pakistan alone to face the crisis of Afghnistan without any financial and military aid. Due to the turmoil in Afghanistan, Pakistan followed reconciliatory policy with Taliban.

The policy was followed till 2001. After the 9/11, American was again seeking alliance with Pakistan. This time Pakistan was forced to support the American by the famous statement of American President to Pakistani President that "Either you are with us or against us".

Unfortunately, Pakistan again become the ally of American in so called war on Terror. Due to the invasion of American and Pakistani support to them, Taliban announced Jihad against Pakistan. This situation brought the wave of suicide attacks in throughout the country. However it was controlled at some extend. But cross border attack has been increased due to weak surveillance of NATO.

The Security concern of cross border attack and suicide has seriously threatened the security of Pakistan in the region. It was not enough for Pakistan that American started Drone attack in the Northern areas of Pakistan which resulted in hate against America in the Public. During 2011, American violated the sovereignty of Pakistan twice. The 2 may incident at Abbottabad and Salala Check Post in Gilgit Baltisitan were willful strike over Pakistani sovereignty.

The involvement of Indian in Baluchistan again forced Pakistan to become aggressive. In the meeting of foreign secretaries, All proves regarding infiltration of India in Baluchistan were presented to the higher authorities of Indian Government. India is also looking key role in the development of Afghanistan. Later India will get the benefit of it.

In such a typical condition, Pakistan must revisit it foreign Policy with USA and India. Firstly, Pakistan should keep aloof from war on terror. This will help to counter the attack from cross border and suicide attacks in Pakistan, which was initiated against Pakistan by the Taliban due to American Support. Secondly, the Politician and Army make unite policy over the prevention of drone attack in the area of Pakistan. The Government should register complain against USA in the UNO due to the violation of its sovereignty. Thirdly, there is need to stop the role of Inida in Baluchistan by diplomatic channel.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Jul 27, 2012   #2
It sounds like you are saying Pakistan's leaders should allow themselves to be influenced by coercion from the threat of attacks by the Taliban. Do you think Pakistan should avoid any kind of involvement in the conflict so that they can avoid incurring the wrath of the Taliban? In this piece of writing, it's unclear whether you think policy should be based on principle.

The policy was followed till 2001. After the attacks of 9/11, America was again seeking alliance with Pakistan. --I corrected the grammar here.

This time Pakistan was forced to support the American effort by the famous statement of American President to Pakistani President: "Either you are with us or against us."

Unfortunately, Pakistan again become the ally of American America in the so-called "war on terror." Due to the invasion by Americans and Pakistani support for them, the Taliban announced Jihad against Pakistan.

This situation brought the wave of suicide attacks in throughout the country. However it was controlled at least to some extent.

In the meeting of foreign secretaries, All proves (???) regarding the infiltration of India in Baluchistan were presented to the higher authorities of the Indian Government. ---I don't know how you were using "prove" in this sentence.

***I think you can go a step further in your analysis and make a more specific suggestion. What is the ultimate goal? What is the most important goal? If you think in a bigger way, you can take this a little further and make it even more meaningful. Thanks for participating at EssayForum!


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