Unanswered [25] | Urgent [0]

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 2

IELTS - several sources as energy consumption in US in 1980 and its forecasting in 2050

ayuriska 7 / 13 1  
Jan 16, 2017   #1
The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

renewable and fossil energy usage comparison

Given is graph comparing several sources as energy consumption in US in 1980 and its forecasting in 2050. Eventhough renewable energy consumption was much lower than fossil energy, both of needs will be predicted to go up in the future except hydropower.

In 1980, at 35 quadrillion units of energy was petrol and oil, growing exponetially and will be predicted to reach a peak in 2030 at approximately 45 quadrillion units, becoming the predominant energy source throughout the period. While natural gas need stood at 20 quadrillion units, US used 15 quadrillion units of coal to fulfill its need in the initial period. Surprisingly, coal consumption is likely to soar dramatically at near 30 quadrillion units rather than gas just less than 5 quadrillion unit increments in 2030.

However, there will be no significant changes for renewable energy consumption in the future. Nuclear, solar/wind and hydropower contributed less than 5 quadrillion units for US's energy in 1980. Interestingly, in the future, while nuclear and solar/wind will be predicted to go up steadily at 5-6 quadrillion units, hydropower consumption will drop to a mere 4 quadrillion units, standing as the lowest energy consumption among other resources.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,797 4780  
Jan 17, 2017   #2
Ayu, for this sort of predictive report essay, you must learn how to format your sentences in the future tense form. That is because the events have not yet happened but are predicted to happen some time in the future. You used the correct term in smattering areas of your essay. So I am guessing that you somehow knew that you had to present it in that form. You just did not know that you had to do it in a continuous form throughout the essay. If we do not consider the grammar range and accuracy portion of this essay, I will say that you have presented a pretty solid piece of work that allows your English comprehension skills to accurately shine through. All aspects of the information can be considered to be well presented and informative as the comparisons made really shed light on the information provided to you in the chart.

Home / Writing Feedback / IELTS - several sources as energy consumption in US in 1980 and its forecasting in 2050
Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳